Monday, 9 September 2013

Writing Descriptions

Now that Spring is here we have been looking at flowers and writing about flowers.

We made some Daffodils for daffodil day and we have displayed them in our room.

We have written descriptions about daffodils,carnations and irises.



Daffodils  Irises and Carnations
Daffodils have oval shaped petals with a dark green and light green stem. It smells good and has a browny leaf at the toop of the stem. Irises have bendy leaves that are thin and sharp. They have purple blue petals and yellow insides. Carnations smell sweet like perfume. They have red bright pinky red petals all twisted petals

Daffodils by Trent
Daffodils have yellow petals and they smell of grass. The petals have a frilly yellow edge. It has a browny leaf at the top of the stem.
Irises by Trent             
Irises have a long sharp end and the petals are purple and yellow and the top of the stem theres a green cover up to its petals.

Daffodils         
Daffodils smell sweet and they are like grass and have a light green stem The petals have a frilly yellow edge and a browny leaf at the top. Irises have bendy leaves that are thin and sharp. They have purple blue petals and yellow inside. Carnations smell sweet like perfume. They have red bright pinky red petals all twisted into sections with a bendy stem.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Room 1,
    Spring is a wonderful season, with so much new life (animals and plants).
    It is obvious that you have spent quite a bit of time closely observing the spring flowers, and you have included a lot of detail in your descriptions - well done.
    Tsana (Robin & Karl's mum)

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